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It is fall everyone, and Ortiz MMA is offering a fall sale
on sweatshirts and hats, it is the time to obtain this item since winter is
just around the corner. But there is a catch to this, you must re-tweet the post
that says “OrtizMMA loves fall weather” and then hashtag it with #OrtizMMArocks right next
to it, then screenshot the tweet and come in to get the items at a discounted
price. The Tweet will be made at 1:55PM today, so make sure to be on the lookout
for it.
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The equipment itself will be Hayabusa sweatshirt and it will be available in gray and all different sizes. And the hats will be from primal combat, one of Raul’s fight sponsors. The discount will vary depending on the item’s size and how close to the date the discount ends. The sale will run from November 3rd all the way to November 30th. Due to the limited amount of gear we have, we will not reorder the items so first come first serve. Come and get our gear, you won’t miss
I really enjoyed reading this post. I think that you need to watch the wording like "obtain", you need to use words that make me feel like I need to buy this item! Make it exciting! Also the ending feels like it is missing something, like the sentence got cut off.
ReplyDeleteInsightful critiques from Ana. I agree. The font is smaller this week, making it inconsistent and harder to read. Heading needs excitement and capitalization. If you want me to retweet, you should have an embedded a link to the tweet. What did I say about how to write dates? The ending appears to be cut off.
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